Hijack My Heart
2nd June
2011
written by Sulthana

photo courtesy of sxc.hu

Dear Bed,

I want to thank you.

We have been together for years,
you and I.

You have been there for me every night,
occasionally days, and I’ve not yet
taken the time to tell you I appreciate you.

Even when I left you, sometimes for days,
others weeks, you’ve welcomed me back
with warmth, comfort and softness.

You held me while my tears
soaked your pillows
over lost love and family rows.

And cradled me tenderly as I
lay feeble and weak with illness,
for days without complaint.

You took the thumps
when I’d fling myself on to you
after a tantrum with life and God.

You creaked under the avoirdupois of
many a friends’ butts as we giggled over gossips
and cried over heart to hearts.

And supported me while I lounged
with laptop on knees or lay on you
scribbling papers last minute.

You tolerated me rolling about restless
and sleepless in my attempt to locate that cool
part of you on a hot stressed summer’s eve.

And you let me leave you cold and bare in winter
while I rolled the blanket tightly and selfishly around me,
a human sausage not letting warmth escape.

You patiently embraced piles of outfits
as I dressed for evenings out, and patiently waited
as I came back too late, too tired and patiently endured
til the next day when I bothered to remove the clothes

You held my back as I lay staring at the ceiling,
my head stuffed with dreams and plans for the future;
or sometimes blank with boredom.

The list is endless Bed; I could go on for a lot more.
You indeed have been there for me and so I thank you.

I have one complaint though. I know you didn’t
like me stumbling home 2:30am after late night partying,
but there was no need for you to knock my shins that hard.
Seriously.

8 Comments

  1. soqqy
    02/06/2011

    Beautifully written, so endearing! But the last part was a winner, made me lol. Thumbs up to this one! :D

  2. Poets United
    02/06/2011

    Nice use of personification…but really the great part is how authentic your poem is – well done…and well crafted.

  3. Nitisha Seebaluck
    02/06/2011

    Amazing work Sult…j’adore…

    beautifully written, witty,amazing sense of humour,….

    Just like Jane Austen described Elizabeth Bennet (Pride and Prejudice) “bright, light and sparkling”….

    Wowww :)

  4. Meher
    03/06/2011

    Love your poems Sultana, especially the last bit. lol

  5. Sulthana
    05/06/2011

    Thank you all for your comments, and good to know it made you laugh :)

  6. 07/06/2011

    nice touch about the shines but for me its the bump in the head with head board and pillow flying off lol well crafted poem.

  7. 08/06/2011

    Loved this poem, and enjoyed your site. Keep doing the work!
    Mary Liz

  8. Sulthana
    11/06/2011

    Lol at Kiran. Luckily I don’t recall any head bumps.

    Mary Liz, thank you for your comment and dropping by :)

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